CumminHam's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[No-Man Episode 1 Redux]

Very Nice! :) Great work on all fronts!

SuperPhil64 responds:

Thanks! Appreciated the kind words. : )

[Injustice 2 - The Third Ending]

not bad at all! :)

TheMadHamster responds:

Thank you!

[Salmon Run issues (Splatoon 2 Parody) - GbcTyler Animation]

i can tell you put effort into this.
and i could see you becoming pretty good at this but you really need to put you nose to the grind stone and work your tail off.

the general premise is... well ... not really funny.... relate-able sure. but i dont think thats enough on its own to carry a short. nor is relate-ability a joke on its on.

in general comedy is hard to critcize because its so subjective so take that witha grain of salt.

i would say put abit more effort into the actual animation... your drawings are passable, but i feel the lazy animation isn't doing you any favors and gets downright distracting.

the rule of thumb would be. if you have good writing or jokes you could get away with poor animation.
if you had good animation and poor writing... while it wouldn't be entertaining it would have merit from a technical standpoint... not to mention technical skill will come in handy with collaborations which naturally yield better project results.

Best of luck! keep at it!

GbcTyler responds:

Thanks for the feedback, I'll keep everything in mind!

[Pop Culture Animation]

if your going to be using the vector tools for animation you really need to use clean line work and solid drawings....
if you insist on having sketchy line work then you really should be animating this Frame by Frame.

think of it like a balance. if you want to save time animating by using vector tools then your drawings should really be Clean and solid.
if you want to save time drawing then you should put that time into the animation.

if your going to sacrifice quality somewhere you need to put that quality into some other area. otherwise it comes off as rather lazy.

im sorry but virtually nothing works about the animation. but a doubt any of our first animations worked very well.

keep working at it.

ak-ok responds:

thank you for the advice!