CumminHam's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Never game for 3 whole days ( warframe raging bunny? )]

not your best work honestly.

foreground main ground and back ground elements are poorly defined. making the image very hard to read.
for example, an easy way to help the readability of an image like this would be to add contrast between the foreground and background..
keeping this in mind.
i would recommend that since this is a scene where someone is gaming i would make the layers closest to the viewer such as the hands holding the controler be lighter.
(due to the light coming from the tv).
and as each layer recedes to that back wall make them darker
(almost never go full black.)

Best of luck! :)

ProjectNetoku responds:

dude it was a scrap draw in like ten minutes XD
what are you expecting heheh

[Lava lamp]

Honestly a bit more work could have gone into the lava lamp.
it also doesn't seem to adhere to perspective even in a fish eye lens.

but all and all i like the concept.
i think if you keep refining it, it could be a nice piece to hang on a wall.

[Cute Ankha]

So adorable!

[Schnonyx]

ok, but why though?

XD

nicely done btw.

[Aurora]

Great!

viqqah responds:

Thanks!!

[Why so Grim?]

Love it! very nicely done!

[Quick sergal]

what your going for here wlll need some refinements.
it currently doesn't seem to work.

But only you really know what your going for with a piece like this.
cant really help much past that.

[Shima :3]

good kitty<3

[Mermaid]

Really nice!
Keep up the good work

viqqah responds:

Thank you so much!!! <3

[Interior scene]

Nice!