CumminHam's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Unji the Traveling Salesword]

might be your best work yet.
the only thing to critcise would be that the mask looks flat. which i assume isn't the case.
an easy way to fix this would be with shading but you don't seem to be doing that here.

another way to imply form would be with your Line-work. hard to explain but i assume you get the picture.

ProjectNetoku responds:

I added a bit of shading... Wait I did right, editing this I had to take off detail and then add it on again since I screwed up layers. Pfft idm criticism. Her mask isn't that flat but its not really that curved and I get what you mean about lines.

[Pink]

Love it man! Great work!

[automaton]

the detailed limbs contrasts the simple face...there is nothing about her face that would imply she is a robot/puppet. it might work better if you simplified her robot parts more or added more detail to her face... in some way...

something about the design of her feet seems real clunky. like it could be refined into a better design compared to the other parts.
yeah it mimics the articulation in our foot... but is that much articulation really necessary? does it need soo many point of articulation?... does it need individual Toes.... seems like economically a hinge joint between the toes and foot would be just fine.... but thats more for puppets i guess.... might just be me though.



in general, from a design perspective it needs some work... but from a technical perspective id say its almost perfect.

Great work!

cashumeru responds:

thanks for the breakdown, i really appreciate stuff like this! i can see where youre coming from, but the idea is that the species isn't synthetic at all, just with intricate joints and such, since theyre born and grow from babies etc. so shes basically organic hard skin and black bone

i have a lot to brush up on though if i ever make a true robotic design, so ill take notes, thanks again!

[Curly Sleep]

why does a robot wear cloths? XD great work!

[Lunch (SFW and NSFW PATREON)]

nice work man! :D

[tv bee]

how very strange yet cute XD.

[BB rhythm]

from an animation standpoint i think you need to hold on some poses more...you hold on one pose but i think if you held on another pose longer aswell it might work better.... its rather hard to read as is.

plus you seem to have fallen into the trap of just warping drawings rather then animating them..... not inherently a bad thing as long as your warping seems to follow the body mechanics... which i personally dont feel they have here.

all and all pretty great!

SpicyBardo responds:

Huh. well yeah, the beat itself its rather a little bit too quick maybe. Thanks for the review.

[Majin 21 - Quickie]

pretty nice!

foreshortening seems a bit off... but foreshortening is a Bitch to get right XD so its fine.

[Happy Valentines day]

May our thoughts and prayers be with those lost in the school shooting that day.
the fathers and mothers who lost the children.

ProjectNetoku responds:

I didn't really want that to correlate with this but my thoughts go out to them

[Spider Princess]

Super Cute!